

File Size: 850 KB
Print Length: 400 pages
Publisher: Atheneum Books for Young Readers (May 8, 2010)
Publication Date: May 11, 2010
Sold by: Simon and Schuster Digital Sales Inc
Language: English
ASIN: B003L77WWS
Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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Word Wise: Enabled
Lending: Not Enabled
Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
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Leaving a one star review is like tipping the waitstaff less than 15%--something I have only ever done in the worst of circumstances, which is to say almost never. Unfortunately, this book has earned it. I'll try to be succinct in my summary of the reasons why:1) As the "About the Author" section states, this is Christopher Grey's first novel--a fact which is painfully obvious, and explains many of the shortcomings, though I don't know why his editors didn't exert more force in improving the writing. For example, the use of present tense and many short, choppy sentences, while intended to create a sense of suspense and action, only serve to give the story an awkward, halting feel. Also, the random and needless direct addresses to the reader are poorly rendered to say the least, and rather than bringing the reader into the story, feel clunky and forced. One can't simply jump into second-person every hundred pages for a sentence. It's just annoying and out of place.2) da Vinci, who is in fact known for being exceptionally kind-hearted, likeable, and talented in the social arts, is portrayed as a self-important ass. He just comes across as a horribly unpleasant person. Not only does it contradict every historical source, but it makes for an unpleasant read, and a poor impression for young people learning about such an incredible human. Besides, who wants to read a 400-page novel about someone who is a total jerk?3) The plot (a generous term in this case) doesn't get started for until nearly 100 pages in.4) The one-liners of what Giacomo is thinking but not saying are not only annoying, but potentially quite confusing for young readers.5) The repeated attempts at puns are exhaustingly bad.
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